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Mar 19Liked by Haley Brengartner

Haley, I love how this turned out. A short piece but one I won't forget.

I think your continual efforts to take risks with writing, try new mediums, new styles will really pay off and help you grow as a writer, find your unique voice.

And love to see you publishing. The world is a better place with Haley Brengartner putting her words out into it (:

Also, depending on your comfort level, would love to read more about the move, see pictures, get the whole story. Living out of a suitcase sucks and hope it ends soon.

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Mar 11Liked by Haley Brengartner

So beautiful and creative Haley. One thing I especially love is the title: Sunshowers. I was drawn in from the first word.

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...i love the build on this one...very sweet...

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Mar 13Liked by Haley Brengartner

Wow, this was so good! It also showed me how poor my domain of the English language is. But this was clever and done very well!

Welcome back Haley!

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Mar 13Liked by Haley Brengartner

Haley. Wow. You made this into such a gripping creative device.

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Mar 11Liked by Haley Brengartner

I enjoyed the creativity of this Haley and always glad to see your writing show up in my feed.

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Mar 11Liked by Haley Brengartner

A beautiful read, thank you for sharing <3 I especially loved how you turned a seemingly boring homework task into such a detailed story. And congrats on the move!

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