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Tommy Dixon's avatar

Haley, I love how this turned out. A short piece but one I won't forget.

I think your continual efforts to take risks with writing, try new mediums, new styles will really pay off and help you grow as a writer, find your unique voice.

And love to see you publishing. The world is a better place with Haley Brengartner putting her words out into it (:

Also, depending on your comfort level, would love to read more about the move, see pictures, get the whole story. Living out of a suitcase sucks and hope it ends soon.

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Haley Brengartner's avatar

Ah!! Thank you for encouraging me to write about the move Tommy. Consider that post coming soon to an inbox near you lol. Appreciate you greatly. I hope Thailand is graced by your presence.

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Tommy Dixon's avatar

Can’t wait (:

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James Bailey's avatar

So beautiful and creative Haley. One thing I especially love is the title: Sunshowers. I was drawn in from the first word.

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Haley Brengartner's avatar

I have to give credit where credit is due, Tommy helped me with that one. Thanks James 💛

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James Bailey's avatar

Then your like the rest of us, getting help from Tommy. Your writing was super creative and like Kelly said, it was a unique structure for the story.

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CansaFis Foote's avatar

...i love the build on this one...very sweet...

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Haley Brengartner's avatar

Thank you, CansaFis!

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Camilo Moreno-Salamanca's avatar

Wow, this was so good! It also showed me how poor my domain of the English language is. But this was clever and done very well!

Welcome back Haley!

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Haley Brengartner's avatar

Thanks so much, Camilo! Can't wait to see you soon

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Becky Isjwara's avatar

Haley. Wow. You made this into such a gripping creative device.

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Haley Brengartner's avatar

Thank you, Becky :)

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Rick Lewis's avatar

I enjoyed the creativity of this Haley and always glad to see your writing show up in my feed.

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Haley Brengartner's avatar

Thanks Rick! And I’m always happy to see you in my comments

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Kelly Davis's avatar

A beautiful read, thank you for sharing <3 I especially loved how you turned a seemingly boring homework task into such a detailed story. And congrats on the move!

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Haley Brengartner's avatar

Thanks so much Kelly! I appreciate it

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